Poetry / Footprints of The Great Souls (Analysis)

Lift a hand,share a smile
ride with the butterfly that
rocks the sky.
Tiny flap,invisible caress,
careless whispers that bear dissent.
It is,and will be,that the self
comes above the rest,
but another placed in good stead
keeps pace with values that bind.

Spare a while,spur a thought,
walk in footprints that have led
the Great Souls,
for strength stretching from the code
of their hearts,
run through these wings that
bear might,
and common truth,
and so our hearts beat in rhyme,
in time with all that is
self,just and strong.

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Like it a lot. But not my style sorry:(

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