Lyrics / thumbs

When you are filled with moral pretense
You must recapture your innocence
The cold and the bitter, the surreal
Will become as host till you heal

Your eyes will make you go blind
The starlight will harbor your time

Motionless travel on a landscape of ice
That path was golden till you turned on the light
Now gauge yourself with resolve
Drag your body with tooth and with claw

Something inside you will break

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November 22, 2009

lifeiwm_deathiwc

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18	M	Sylacauga, AL	November 22

lifeiwm_deathiwc reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

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November 13, 2009

cooljim102055

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930	72.0% (375 votes)	19.2%

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54	M	Taunton, MA	November 20

cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,
quite deep…i’m not sure why it’s call “thumbs” though, you have alot of good rhymes and good meter for a song…i think you need one more verse and need to make it a bit more clearer for any listener to understand..having simplicity and orginality is very hard but this is a good start..remember..all songs have a begining/middle and end…hope to read you again..jim