Poetry / The Christ (Analysis)
He created the heavens and the earth, He formed the complexity of the New Birth. He healed the sick, the dumb, and the lame, He accomplished these miracles for His Father's glory, not fortune or fame. He is the ultimate example of love, peace, and joy. He was sent from above, planted in the east, and was seen as a baby boy. He grew up and became the man that would walk the land, of a people that would worship Him, and then drive nails into His feet and hands. He was born to die for their sins and ours, but rose three days later proving He was greater, than death and the grave, who came against Him bold and brave but got slaughtered by His infinite might and power. Of His good news we must proclaim, to those who refuse to confess His name. He is the first and the last. He will be the future, is now the present, and was always the past. He is a friend who sticks closer than a brother, above Him there's no other. For us He came once to die, but when He comes again, some with Him will fly and others will remain to fry. He is the one true Christ.
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I’m probably just saying this ‘cause I love Christ, but this poem rocks!
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The message in this piece is great but the flow is off, as well as the meter.
Your sentences seem too wordy. Try getting as much information with less fill-in words.
Also it is hard to read in the paragraph format.
You are on a good track with a wonderful message to get out. Don’t give up.
This is just my opinion and others will probably disagree with me. I’m no editor but I try to help the best I can.
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