Lyrics / "I've Loved" (Analysis)

I have a sense of humor that rants at the masses.
I place fantastic above realistic.
I bump the status
Quo in the dark cause
All that I am, I want to express to the full.

I’ve loved a man as a miracle,
Because he was a miracle I could love.
If all about him was all that was great to me,
I’d be so blessed to
Fall in love once more
Like I did so headstrong
As with my #1 love donner.

Loving him with such a force
Was awe inspiring.
I just had to come down
And feel the low.
So now I heal
With just as much of a force.

I have a sense of humor that rants at the masses.
I place fantastic above realistic.
I bump the status
Quo in the dark cause
All that I am, I want to express to the full.

If I could pin point
My perspect-uv,
It would be stretch
My love
Wit' every dove
Willin to come
Sit next to me
For love’s miracle.

No one loves,
Without consequences
Just as I did
I reawaken
In the distance.

To bear the distance……………

Is yet another love.
 

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October 29, 2009

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This is very heartfelt. I think it’s great and I dont have anything to add to it or any suggestions on how to make it better.

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