Poetry / Breakthrough
I am empty, or
full.
I am sucked dry.
Unable to believe
the I've went this long
under the radar
Nobody sounded the alarm.
I am filled
with the thickest apprehension.
Cannot believe that
I'm okay,
you're okay, and
we're both okay
with me.
Can you keep a secret?
Will you sell out?
Beyond this leather sleeve
is a child
in a house with ears
and malice
and spite.
This is where my detachment comes from.
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“the I’ve went this long” typo: The should be That. other than that, there is no problem with this piece whatsoever. It’s always great to meet other talented poets from Michigan. To be perfectly honest, I think you’re the best Michiganian writer I’ve read. I can’t wait to read you after you’re published.
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