well, i actually am only 17, but i put 19 so i could read work that is labeled mature for immature reasons. Its amazing how people voluntarily censor themselves these days. But i digress…anyways, thank you again for reviewing my work. I’ve been writing as a passion since I was 12, so I’ve had a lot of time to sort of gather my thoughts into one cohesive template. My style is obviously derived from the old beat stly of the 50’s and 60’s. I find that everyone has a style that best suits who they are as a writer.
Poetry / Who are you?
I am starving.
Throwing up
hydrochloric acid dreams
into wastebaskets lined with poetry.
I am thirsty.
Desert weasel dog tongue
lapping up
pools of black tar ink.
I bleed black and white
and am re(a)d all-over.
I've got an armoured think tank, and
enough creativity tariffs
to stay in business.
I am a poet
beyond the lengths of security
reality, and
time.
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DarkAngel123 reviewed Version 1 -
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I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. The introduction of who you are, and what you represent was executed uniquely to perfection, almost as if it was a poetic resume to the writing world. Just a breath of fresh air! Thank you:)
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Alex_Bruinekool reviewed Version 1 -
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Again, a very good poem. Only 19, but you already have your own style. This one had kindof a jazzy flavor to it. I love the line “and am re(a)d all-over.”
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