Poetry / Apprehensive

Getting my act together.
Acting as I should,
as I'm told,
as I would
if any of this were real;
if I were a college student;
made for the career world.
Made for the city.
Manhattan boyfriend.
Freelance journalist.
Traveller.
Renaissance woman.
Cultured intellectual.
Poet.
Lover.
Female.
Adult.
Human.

Actor.
 

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October 21, 2009

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Your name attracted me because it made me think of the classic Ledbelly song. I’m glad I noticed you, because you have some talent. You manage to let out your emotions while sounding intelligent and relating those emotions to the observer. You’re a good writer and a deep thinker, and I will certainly be looking to review more of your work.

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Age: 19
Loc: Beulah, MI
Gen: F
Last Login: November 20
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