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Lyrics / A Work In Progress Finally Finished (Analysis)

Your so classic
So quiet and clean
Just like a museum
Of modern art
A finish so clean and clear
So prestine and divine
Your eyes are heaven
And lips that taste
Of prescious red wine
With so much to say
Your face is worth
A thousand words
Your lips rarely part
But your smile
Just gives it away
And now I'm not afraid
To be myself today
Holloween isn't just once
And you make me believe
Valentine's this year round
Isn't just another day but today
And with this medium pace
We can look both ways
Before we can cross tonight
As my compass points your way
You just make me want to stay
I keep staring at these paintings
And I'm starting to make it through
Peering so deep into you
While taking notes in my mind
All the finer points
Until I recite them back
From memory, as you breath
Them in seperately
As these words paint
A priceless piece of work
This is my love que

 

 

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