Poetry / envisioned kiss
waited to hear she enjoyed our shared; if only verbal passion
i must admit when it comes to love, i am simply too old fashioned
our envisioned lovely kiss, with her so far away
the fire continues to warm deeply my soul, very comforting, she will never stray
pinning her arms up over her relaxed head
she wants me even closer to her, desires inbred
her heart races as i pull her in so very tight
i feel her wanting me, the timing is just right
our warm bodies generate such besotted heat
tasting her juicy mouth, so incredibly taffy sweet
arching her back, head now touches the wall… lifting her tender chin
i pursue her open neck, tasting her salty, but somehow sweet sin
our hearts pound hard in perfected rhythm, almost out loud
feeling her knees falter, passions abound
pressing her tightly, to support her weakened body’s weight
exchanging ravenous, impetuous flavours, venomous steam we create
pulling her tender arms down, her tiny hands to the small of my back
sliding my hands over her butt, wanting to attack
i again push her in to me, she sighs with pure delight
hearing her moaning, i whisper in her craving ear, it is tonight
as i quietly turn the brass door knob…
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A very passionate piece. I love it. The rhyme is perfect. I can envsion the lovers and the kiss. You were made for this kind of writing. I can feel passion dripping off the page. Another successful piece. I wish you had more points.
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