Poetry / To have a Muse

never had a muse until now-

From the first day-To the second-To the third-

And then several that followed-


Bringing me to now-

On the sixth time I’ve listened to Bowie’s - “ Eight Line Poem”

Filling the heart with Niagara falls on guitar-

pounded but withstanding-

 finally running down river-

To the pools of paradise-

where piranhas are toothless and musically inclined-
 

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