Poetry / When I Write… (Analysis)

When I write I release all stress or frustration,
Through my lyrical creation…
When I write in this lyrical form,
A poem is born…
When I write my thoughts, they seem to orchestrate,
My audience can relate…
When I write it’s like a harmony of experiences,
Telling life stories through sentences…

Poem/St8ment: “When I Write…”
Created On: 6/07/2003
Created By: Rebelwisdom1071 aka Mr. Best
© Poetikanimashun1BC

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July 06, 2009

jungsnkim

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July 05, 2009

skip2mylou

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32	F	Chicago, IL	August 15

skip2mylou reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

You have a great handle on rhyme, but this feels a little sparse. I can neither “see” anything in this poem nor do I have any particular revelations reading it. Though it’s mundane, it has nice potential. Keep working!

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July 04, 2009

Marowit

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July 04, 2009

DLCW

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DLCW reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Using When I write for every other line threw me off at first but for the way the poem is written it may work.
Loved lines 1 and 2
When I write I release all stress or frustration,
Through my lyrical creation…

Thats how I feel when I write and most times why I write.

I also like the form it makes the body look beautiful.
Overall solid piece.