Quotes / 9 word quote

Bravo!
Starting with I know lets the reader know that you know that the “you know” knows it all…perfect.
But remember that old saying:  ”The more you stir shit…” ;)

No you don’t!  Actually it was great.  And I do know shit.  but usually I flush him.  Great play on the “I know, you know…” quotes.

Uh… What? There’s way to much repetition here for your statement to be totally clear. (I’m not crazy about the bit of profanity at the end. Curse words are like nukes- use them sparingly and with devasting effeciency.)

At the very least, try substituting other words for “know” to break up the monotony of the piece, like “realize” or “understand”. That way, you have a bit of variety to the statement.

I think the ”,” really caught me off guard. Though I can relate to this quote and I find it rather amusing I feel like it could have been worded differently… like I don’t know “I know that you know I know nothing about just about everything.” something longer I believe would do it justice. All in all good job! = )

Not exactly deep. I mean, yeah, everyone thinks they don’t know anything about something, but you could have possibly worded it different. Maybe put a metaphor in there or something.

Ok well it is to the point about not having a point . Like it,thought it !!

Haha, its simple, but i like it.

Cute, but I’m not sure how many people will relate to it.

This was a little confusing to me, but I think I got the meaning. But hey that’s what writing is all about. “Through whose understand, is who we understand.” ... dbrockman

pithy!