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I know, you know, I know nothing about everything!

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jthorn28 avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2009

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I like it, and I know everyting about nothing.

snarfus avatar General Stranger

June 20, 2009

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Uh… What? There’s way to much repetition here for your statement to be totally clear. (I’m not crazy about the bit of profanity at the end. Curse words are like nukes- use them sparingly and with devasting effeciency.)

At the very least, try substituting other words for “know” to break up the monotony of the piece, like “realize” or “understand”. That way, you have a bit of variety to the statement.

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June 20, 2009

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Bravo!
Starting with I know lets the reader know that you know that the “you know” knows it all…perfect.
But remember that old saying:  ”The more you stir shit…” ;)

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September 16, 2009

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This was a little confusing to me, but I think I got the meaning. But hey that’s what writing is all about. “Through whose understand, is who we understand.” ... dbrockman

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August 18, 2009

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Haha, its simple, but i like it.

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August 12, 2009

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Ok well it is to the point about not having a point . Like it,thought it !!

loveandrockets28 avatar General Stranger

September 28, 2009

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pithy!

BuiltForSin avatar General Stranger

August 07, 2009

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Not exactly deep. I mean, yeah, everyone thinks they don’t know anything about something, but you could have possibly worded it different. Maybe put a metaphor in there or something.

CynthiaP avatar General Stranger

August 31, 2009

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Cute, but I’m not sure how many people will relate to it.

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October 06, 2009

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Most anyone can say we know everything about nothing and nothing about everything. The key is to find the point in between where you know enough about enough. Good job. :)

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