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What I've learned cannot be described as extraordinary but true hypocrisy.
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It’s certainly random, but it’s also very vague and obtuse. It lacks context. Even just changing the first part to “What I’ve learned about __” would make this so much better, as it gives the reader more insight.
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hi there,
well it was very clever with words…not extraordinary/just appears that way…but people might think every life and what is learned (no matter what that may be)...is extraordinary…and very real….but what YOU write is what you believe..so based on that..i’d say this is a good one…keep writing..jim
you may want to put in what subject you have been learning about. This might make the quote a bit more relavent. The phrasing at the end is a bit strange as well, “true hypocrisy” maybe play with that part a little. You could use hypocrytical instead? Quotes are hard to come up with and to critique but it is interesting.
It would have been better if you referenced what it is you have learned that is true hypocrisy over extraordinary, it rings too general, as if all that you have learned has been a sham, and I doubt that that can be true. Something must have been of value. I don’t think this really describes anyone fully as it stands.
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