Romance / love marks.

Have you ever woken up in a relationship? I have.

I’ve woken up next to some person I didn’t even know the last name of.

We rolled around the night before and made love marks that were never really full of love.

I sit there and I laugh. Laugh in confusion. Laugh in amazement. I hate what just happened but I still love life. The fact that I can roll around naked with that person, and not care that I don't know their last name, as long as I’m being safe. That I can pour that liquor down my throat, and not care that I’m throwing my life away for a temporary high because life is absolutely beautiful.

Even after all that real love is gone; I’ve still got love for life. The love that makes it all worth while, because I've got to just look life in the eye and realize that the pupil is fully dilated. You know why? Because life is full of blackness. All the colors combined. And really, this life is full of color, the color that stares at me from the eyes of that naked person, the colors that are swirling on the ceiling when I’m high, and the colors that everyone has shining off of them.

You've just got to live. You've got one chance at this life, don't take it for granted. But don't mess it up either.

Love comes and goes throughout life.

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July 05, 2009

wrongwriter

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wrongwriter reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Very interesting perspective. The writing is a bit choppy; some of the sentences too curt. But overall, very insightful. I think you should rewrite it and expand on the original idea, you’ll really have something special.

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