Poetry / You Are A Friend (Analysis)

You are a friend to me,

Though we've never met.

You are a friend to me,

Though we never talk.

You are a friend to me.

Though you've never seen my face.

You are a friend to me,

Though i've never seen yours.

You are a friend to me,

And forever a friend you'll be.

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steelblue71 avatar General Stranger

September 10, 2009

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May 26, 2009

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I enjoyed this piece of art. I believe that you have a natural talent and you should keep building that talent by writing more and more.

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May 18, 2009

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yayayayayaya i remember reading this a few weeks ago=-D it still makes me feel happy!!! I really like the repetition of the you are a friend to me, I also really like the ending.

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May 15, 2009

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Hi, I am trying to figure out this…is the poem telling of all of the friends we do not yet know or that we will make in the future. I am curious to know that? Also you need to seperate into stanzas, people tell me this all the time :) so I can understand I am probably not the first to say it. Overall good job on your poem, it seemed very heartfelt and sweet

Wigmo avatar General Stranger

May 15, 2009

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I’m assuming this is a poem about friends online.  It’s nothing amazing or groundbreaking, just so so.  You are a friend to me is used in every other line and to me it’s just not that great of a line to be repeated.  Doesn’t appeal to me.  Besides the last line every other line begins with Though.  Sorry just not that moving.

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May 14, 2009

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Ironically enough this explains a lot of a situation i was previously in, i love the simplicity communicated within this.

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Age: 18
Loc: Hineston, LA
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