Poetry / distorted images and false idols
People seem to be followers of distorted images and false idols. The reality of the existance of the mediocre boy band titled "The Jonas Brothers" is proof of that. The 12-17 aged followers are only following these false idols due to their sexual appeal. Is sexual appeal the only thing that matters to them? Many males have lost their girlfriends due to them pursuing this band. Fuck it fangirls, it ain't gonna happen and they aren't going to do the have sex with multiple women approach because they wear purity rings. The band isn't really talented to media glorifies it and other things. Britany Spears is dried up to the core a horrible parent indeed. Yet the media can turn her into a glorifed pop star ready to be used up again. Same will problably happen with miley cyrus in time. The media is trying to build a 50-feet steel wall from reality and try to follow the false idol of profit. Anything is exploited and marketed with their large, obscuring wall. In fact, this very piece of literature may be exploited at some point. If people weren't so stupid they'd know the truth. However stupid people is an unfortunate reality. That's why we intellectuals must attempt to take down our oppresors even as they try to censor our opinion. However there are many issues in the world let this not be an issue because these issues are caused by completely trivial reasons. If this obscurity is someday ended we can look at the bright summer sky and rejoice. Until then we must fight to the end.
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Well, your point I agree with, whole-heartedly.
But-
“with multiple women approach because they wear purity rings” – Maybe you meant “with the multiple women approaching”? (Although, on a side note, you should remember that they are Disney-marketed, but a couple of them are legally adults, right? The whole purity ring thing is likely to be a publicity stunt.)
“to media glorifies it and other things” – Instead, I’m guessing it should be “so the media glorifies it, among other things”.
Miley Cyrus needs to be capitalized, and with “try to follow the false idol of profit”, maybe you could instead say “trying to follow” or just “follow”.
“However stupid people is an unfortunate reality.”- I think you mean “stupid people are an unfortunate reality”.
Also, “oppresors” is spelled “opressors”.
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well.
I wasn’t expecting that.
but you have a very fine point about the jonas brothers being a mediocre boy band at best
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