Poetry / Our Heart Song (Analysis)

Many dreams begin with you
many nights of passion grew
days to months to years we two
your pain so hidden
your past so dark
my nightmare all vanished fast
the blanket of love spead about
to heal us both within without

our years threatened
breathing lost
hope forgot
rapid heartbeats
fear at hand
loss of this?
please hold my hand
bound we two
the physicians call
my heart bleeds
your body frail
awaiting the heal that comes
slowly
so slowly

life a mountian we climb
this mountain we now face
is up to us to overcome
and that we will
the scars that mark
your physical battle
my promise to you
always to be your true heart

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