Poetry / Abstract Actuality (Analysis)
When crying isn't enough
I weep
When silence just creeps up
I speak
Up, down and all around
Me
Floating in your pretty boat
With glee
Let's make this easy
Invisibility
The beauty of my shell
Frailty
An abstract actuality
Fleeting
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This poem’s pretty good. In the line: When silence just creeps up, you don’t need the word “just”; it read fine as when silence creeps up. It sounds like you’re saying “See me for what I am, love me, and care for me” If I can understand the meaning, then it’s a great poem. Publish it :D
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I like the words you use, good rhyme; me, glee, invisibility. Abstract actuality is an intriguing title and theme, the feeling I get looking at an abstract painting. Thanks
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