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Tin Roofs Are Deadly

She usually loved the rain
But tonight it sounded
Like premeditated murder

If he'd just reach out to her
Even from another hemisphere
She'd hold his hand

But the quiet downpour of no one
Continued to drown her

And she always believed
It would be
The tears
That took her under

January, 2009

 

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