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   If your heart is right, your world will be too.

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adambeckner avatar General Stranger

February 17, 2009

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i try sayin that to my girlfriend in many different ways… i will use this one next time! thanks

bjkawa avatar General Stranger

February 13, 2009

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Very nice quote.  It is thought provoking, to the point, and exact.

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February 11, 2009

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I like this alot! Its very true and profound. The only thing I could think of altering would be “world” to maybe “life” it might flow a little better…Not exactly sure…

Keep up the good work!!!

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February 09, 2009

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A very optimistic observation. Maybe not entirely true but no one wants to hear the truth all the time anyway.Keep writing. :)

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February 07, 2009

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i love it!!! i dont know what else to say because it is so true. couldnt be put any better

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February 07, 2009

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Optimistic comes to mind.  Meaning that the saying “If your heart is right, your world will be too.”  

In a optimistic situation this would go good, but in a pessimistic situation.  I can see some not so right endings in ones world.  But cute stab at it.  

Uhhg, now you got me thinking.  I will pondering your line all day.  Thanks a lot. :P

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February 06, 2009

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vary well written and so true!!

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February 06, 2009

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Truth and love, summed up into a single quote to express the very essence of what makes us human. I applaud you.

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February 05, 2009

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My hearts left, well, your right.

Can’t argue with the truth of the matter. Although, the quote isn’t very striking. It’s recycled. Play with the idea.  

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February 04, 2009

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I like this, it is a fundamental truth, presuming of course that “right” is an empirical term describing rational morality.  It touches on the importance of perspective, which is a pet theme of mine.  Good Work.

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