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The secret nature of a lover's tryst means to be lonely, but the breakup is worse.

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pigpin avatar General Stranger

March 10, 2009

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i agree with you, even though you know that you growing apart the breakup is still hard.

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January 12, 2009

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I thought more of intricate struggle than affair, but now re-reading I can see how affair my fit nicely.
I agree with this wholeheartedly, people stay together afterwards because they are too scared to be alone when ironically they are more alone together than they ever would be apart.
They say love is blind, but sometimes love just makes us stupid.

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January 17, 2009

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hi there,

well i think a quote of 16 words is to long for a good quote..(even though yours is 14…:)....i think a good quote is around 6 words with a strong impact, or informative, or profound, or funny..and yes even sad…but whatever..short and to the point…trim the fat with your idea and repost and i better you get better results…till then,,jim

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