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Poetry / I'm no memory
And now I'm a memory that dances in your heard.
You want me to save you cause you feel like your dead.
The life that was so important is now only a joke.
And everything you build has fallen and broke.
Why does it still hurt to hear your voice.
leaving me alone and hurting was your choice.
You paint the past with colorful lies,
giving excuses and strange alibi's.
So much time has passed by yet you still make me cry.
You think time clouds my memory and I don't remmber the past.
Even with so much time gone by the pain still last.
You want me to forget and I don't know how.
There wasn't any trust left then why should there be some now.
You ask if we have a chance to try again.
You want forgiveness and I don't know how,
I just know what has happened and how you have been.
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And…heard – I thinking you meant ‘head’
The rhyming is good, ‘head, dead’ ‘joke, broke’ etc.
The feeling of being left alone because someone else was broken, someone else had fallen. Painting the past with colorful lies, knowing one can’t admit to his/her mistakes that they have to lie about what the past held, that the memories were good enough.
The sadness of the one who hurt you wants forgiveness and another chance, but because of the lies and deceit, it’s difficult to be able to trust and move forward with them. They think you’re going to forget what they had done and everything will be okay, but you will always remember the pain and loneliness they left you with.
I like this. It’s of pain, lies, deceit and wanting to forget and forgive but not sure if you can.
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