Poetry / Reckless abandon

The timid are the greatest fools,
the ones who hold back,
deserve the pity from those
who hold nothing back.

I will tell you an unpleasant truth
about reckless abandon
and the nature of love:
neither should be done carelessly

Love, like reckless abandon
does not know how to deceive,
and this truth is a part of me
for I love and I live in that way.

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October 10, 2008

Visualear

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Are you saying the foolish who are timid deserve pity from those who hold nothing back?
I love this warning, although in life it just doesn’t happen very often…those who hold nothing back being forgiving of those who don’t. I just want to make sure this is what you mean.

I have to read the last paragraph a lot, because I’m trying to grasp the idea
of a reckless abandon not knowing how to deceive. It can be done, I know.
But, the mind wants to automatically put them together, as similar entity.