Poetry / Zomfthin (Analysis)

your so beautiful its strikingly pitiful

dressed up in blue to say the least

you never knew the exchange of words

you gathered from walking into the room

at least my heart won't die tonight

forgiving everything in sight

has become my hobby

to bad your the best one

that at night ignores me best

ill be the jewel in your eye drag you down

and strike high as the living sky

being nothing more than a boast or even swag

that you exchange when you get home

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November 20, 2008

asiantofu

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November 20, 2008

LAluver4ever

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September 23, 2008

ScorpionHunter

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September 23, 2008

Billy

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Billy reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

the line “ill be the jewel in your eye drag you down” has a distinctly different sound to it than the rest of the poem… However, it was a nice read… Overall, nice job.

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