Poetry / Too Deep... Part 1

A life hungary child, and her daddy's little girl,
He was all that she needed, the weight of her world.

Made of sugar and strength, gentle and kind,
Through her childish eyes, through her childish mind.

But on the day she grew up, she saw him for real,
Shocked and astonished, at the hurt she could feel.

What was her problem, why hadn't she seen,
That all along he had been, a man hateful and mean?

On her mother she turned, she traded in all respect,
For fear of becoming her... weak and well kept.

This was the day, she turned herself inside out,
A softly lit candle, blown hard and burnt out.

And the harder she fought, the harder it hit her,
Her light hearted sweetness, darkened and bittered.

Self lead into thinking, she had over come all,
Set the rise in her ego, that pushed her to fall.

And then, there he was, the next step in her failure,
An angel with blue eyes, and bad boy behavior...

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