hi jim, thanks for your review
Quotes / Oh the possibilities!
Staring into space… eventually I’ll find a galaxy of possiblities.
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There is an exaggerated hopefulness about this that is appealing. If you changed “a galaxy” to “galaxies” this would even be more hopeful. And it would rhyme.
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hi,
i think the title is fine, and the quote very good, cause like the galaxy, the opportunties are unlimited..i think i would change it a little, to, “staring into space, into a galaxy of possibilities”...but that’s just my opinion…nice one,,,jim
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