Hi, thanks for your review. When I refer to corporate America, it’s not about selling out and giving my business to a big giant like Wal-Mart… what I meant was that instead of pursuing a career as a writer/artist, I instead chose a career in corporate America as the way to use my writing skills… because the money is better in corporate America. So, perhaps I do ned to reword it to be clearer… but it wouldn’t be reworded to include reference to patronizing a big giant like wal-Mart. Different meaning to my corporate America than what you took it to mean… that’s all. Thanks.
Short Story / Sold Out: six-word memoir contest
My poet’s soul chose corporate America.
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Hahaha. I know, we have to work. Too bad. It speaks of clearly of a writers life, Sandi
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consider changing perspective
“a poet’s soul, shopping at walmart.” (replace corporate america with an image that invokes the same)
Very shory and to the point. I hope corporate America chooses you.
Concise, but I guess with six words you have to be, heh. It’s an idea that could be expanded upon for a full story.
It is well written and to the point. I creates a sad feeling but also wonder as to how the poet sold out. It relates well to the topic at hand and the title chosen for it. Well done.
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