Short Story / Sold Out: six-word memoir contest

My poet’s soul chose corporate America.

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VelvetEclipse avatar General Stranger

September 11, 2008

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Very shory and to the point. I hope corporate America chooses you.

jhmckeogh avatar General Stranger

August 29, 2008

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consider changing perspective

“a poet’s soul, shopping at walmart.”  (replace corporate america with an image that invokes the same)

dylanmatthews avatar General Stranger

August 21, 2008

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It is well written and to the point.  I creates a sad feeling but also wonder as to how the poet sold out.  It relates well to the topic at hand and the title chosen for it.  Well done.

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August 15, 2008

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Hahaha. I know, we have to work. Too bad. It speaks of clearly of a writers life, Sandi

econobeing avatar General Stranger

August 15, 2008

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Concise, but I guess with six words you have to be, heh.  It’s an idea that could be expanded upon for a full story.

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Age: 41
Loc: Portsmouth, NH
Gen: F
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