Haiku/Senryu / As the Crow Flies...

High above grey mounts,
Misty clouds obscure all sight,
Therein lays crows’s way

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aime avatar General Stranger

August 19, 2008

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aime reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

The first two lines are really captivating but the third doesn’t read as well as it could with them

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