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twelve cans; one goal; create entertainment!
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JessicaHumiston reviewed Version 1 -
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this is very simple and your thought is clear. instead of using ; i would suggest spacing instead:
Twelve cans
one goal
create entertainment!
just to give it a little more… umph.
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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 -
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hi there,
12 cans uh?..sounds like a big party!!!..i think the word entertainment should be changed to art….i think that’s what most writers aim for, though they can be entertaining at times too…jim
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