Flash Fiction / words for smith

I guess I don’t understan how the title goes witht he story. Your story rings true for many people who try to do something different without the experience.

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August 13, 2008

by fourtwenz

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k ngr. Maybe thats why you pompus queers are friendless?

August 13, 2008

by fourtwenz

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nice ngrs like you get to actually chat with others. Your an embaressment to mankind. But a ngr dike like you would say humankind? Fucking trash monkey, it makes perfect sense.

August 13, 2008

by chelly

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Nice. Not everyone will give you rave reviews on your work. I tried to express in as little words as I could to spare you credits, that I didn’t understand how your title went along with your 6 word memoir, (I caught it afterwards though). I also said your words ring true for many because in life alot of people quit their job to chase a dream without background,experience, knowledge or without first researching. Sometimes it works  but for others they QUIT THEIR DAY JOB TOO SOON. If you didn’t like my review all you had to do was ask for a refund. I guess that would have been too easy though and too decent of you to do.

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This made me smile, most of these are heavy and have a sense of longing, this one has a lightness to it.
Thanks
Jodie

This is an interesting quote, but considering some of the others I have read for this contest I don’t think it’s good enough. It strikes me as too vague, but then again, how much can you say with 6 words? I’m sure your next one will be awesome.

i read ur 6 word memior and you only used 5 words not six, i counted them myself and there are only 5. i think you need to go back and try again or just other words or just add a word. best of luck

I like how this sounds bittersweet – the idea that you quit it prematurely suggests that while you did it too soon, the fact that you quit was good, or would have been at a late enough date.
I think it would have flowed better with a different word in place of ‘premature,’ but I’m not sure what word. Maybe ‘early,’? That could just be me. Something like, ‘too soon,’ but with one word.