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Many years experience, thinking about writing.

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Souldierpoet avatar General Friend

September 06, 2009

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Souldierpoet reviewed Version 4 - Read 100% of the Item

If I get this one, I think it’s sad.  Thinking about writing, rather than writing, it’s a sad life to live, but if that’s your memoir, you described it well in a few words.  Now, stop thinking and get back to writing!

MaggieMinardi avatar General Stranger

January 07, 2009

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I do like this.  I was working on several at one time, most of which I’ve forgotten, but yours is far better than “I thought I’d have more time.” (which was the one I remember.
It makes you think, which I always find intriguing.

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September 17, 2008

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Reading this, Hamlet springs to mind – so, to “mangly” misquote Shakespeare : To write, or not to write, THAT is the question… Your six words seem to me to be asking that question – whether ‘tis nobler to put one’s life (or “many years experience”) onto a page or not. Or is the comma a substitute for the word “of” – which would indicate a longer period of hesitation? Very intriguing. I liked it very much, and I am glad I was able to read it.

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August 03, 2008

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Very good! I may be wrong, but do I sense that the word “of” could stand in for the comma? Or could it be the words “so I am” standing in for that comma? Am I close to it’s meaning? I like six word memoirs that are open to different interpretations. Nice job!

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August 05, 2008

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poetry_is_the_new_black123 reviewed Version 4 - Read 100% of the Item

Many years to come, all alone.
I like this though. :]

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March 13, 2009

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jeells avatar General Stranger

August 12, 2008

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The tragic truth. Many can relate. The problem of every writer, aspiring or bestselling.

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