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Poetry / His Six Word Definition of Life
Love once given…
was never returned.
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intimate_le reviewed Version 1 -
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I love this piece reminds me of a broken heart. And it was beautifully written.
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Bendo13 reviewed Version 1 -
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I can relate to that and it being a common reason for me to write a number of different things. Great job, I like it.
Astriapo reviewed Version 1 -
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Very nice. It stirs up more emotions than just that of life. It brings to mind the loneliness of everything.
l13dj13 reviewed Version 1 -
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truelly deep… makes sense… really like it, we all feel like that some dyas.
LuckyHabit reviewed Version 1 -
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Passion, heartbreak, loss, yearning so many emotions in so few words brilliant truth, well spoken.
derekosborne reviewed Version 1 -
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Might work. SMITH is looking for memoirs about the creative process and this one certainly ranks as one of the leaders for creating most things.
sadpoet reviewed Version 1 -
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Although love was given and not returned the failure is not from society but from the artist (artist, writer, poet, etc…) feeling as though the effort was not appreciated or returned but in actuality creation is the reward. Something new, original, unique to it’s maker and the WORLD! Passion is your payment.
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KatieDub226 reviewed Version 1 -
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Tragic? Yes.
Earth-shattering and new idea? No.
I think there must be a more powerful way to give this sentiment without sounding like a narration. If I just got my heart stomped on, I wouldn’t turn to my best friend and say, “Well…love once given was never returned.”
Keep at it!
thepastinfuture reviewed Version 1 -
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I like the sentiment, I know what your trying to say, but maybe for impact, maybe instead of “was never returned” you try “is never returned”. This would shake me up a lot more than this statement of rememberance of love that was never given the chance to be lost.
ncwriter reviewed Version 1 -
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Love is a big four-letter word. Eventually, love finds you.
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