Poetry / 6 words: submissions revised

_{forsake this world; paint my own.}

painting randomized faceless people; letting go.

_{Koolaid Stand in need of sugar.}

Writing my life line by line.

_{My life written, reputation debated; unstated.}

Melted crayons: porch masterpiece for sale.

_{Revise and you’ll redeem renewed inspiration.}

Creation of creative creativity creating life.

_{Blind love, loveless love life made.}

Love only what loves me, ART.

_{ART loves only what loves ART.}

ART loves me. I love ART.

_{Artistic Revolution of Traditional rebellious passion.}

Clouded conclusions concocted in my head.

_{Illusions of success cause consistent failure.}

I think I’ll write a book.

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July 28, 2008

Dexus

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Dexus reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

You definitely have a gift with words :)

Isn’t inspiration wonderful?

Keep playing, I’m sure someone will come out and join you ;p

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