Poetry / Stop

Stop
Why on earth is it so hard
For you to understand
A four letter
One syllable
Easy word

Stop
Messing with my head
Giving me hope
Building me up
Giving me love

But most importantly
Stop
Breaking my heart

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July 28, 2008

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i read ur pome and i thought it was great. nice work. i liked how u put stop in there as well. i think it would be better if u went back and put stop in ALL CAPS! but thats just a sujejtin

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