Poetry / The Art of Seduction

Stepped into SANCTUARY
After my poet show
You know the spot
Where everybody’s on the low.. low
That’s when I saw her
She saw me
I felt a stirring deep with in
Smoothly picking up MOMENTUM
Irresistibly…
Without using her hands
She had a firm GRIP on me
5’5” 126, wearing nothing but a g-string
Her dark RED lips
And Sexy thighs
MY REFLECTION in the mirror was starting to FADE
Was I high ? She had me so memorized
Sittin’ properly up on top of me
She’s riding, ain’t no stopping me now
She bounced fast
Then rocked slow
MYSTERIOUS girl
please help me wipe the sweat away from my brow
You give me intense fever! hell is not on earth
And if it is, what a lovely way to burn
The feeling that I felt.. could not be categorized…
Her PASSION was full of heat
The kind that make devils cry
There ain’t no limit
To what she’d do
She revealed her FANGS
I’m listening, she’s whispering
Her girls wanna BITE me too…

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LuckyHabit avatar General Friend

July 25, 2008

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Interesting
I own the book ‘the art of seduction’
I was also, once upon a time, a dancer in vegas…
so I can relate from the other side of this poem
more so interesting, I am 5’5” & about 125lbs or so
I like this poem
I like that you were able express a lack of power
as few people can
bravo

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