Poetry / Im Here (Analysis)

tell me about your happiness and joys
and i will rejoice with you.
tell me about your sorrows and sadness
and i will mourn with you.
tell me your worries and concerns
and i will comfort you.

tell me your deepest secrets
and in my heart i will lock them away.
give to me your greatest trust
and it i will not betray.

give me your time and attention
and worthwhile i will make it.
give me your heart
and i will never break it.

give me your love
and in return,
all of myself i give to you,
all you must do is take it.

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