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What did i do,
I know i did nothing,
I love her with all my heart,
i lay there next to her,
and she says i cant do this,
my thoughts were lost,
i could not say anything,
right after we were intement,
laying there wondering,
Why,
Why doses she have to leave,
The hope in my heart is lost,
she not doing anything about it,
its not right at all,
really is there reasen for this,
the keys of my life have been stolen from me,
Relashionships seem like sand in my hands,
falling and slipping from grasps,
I am falling in a mass of insicurity,
let my heart be scared with from my falts that i went through,
I had my blessings come to be misfurtunes,
all my love a lie,
and nothing to show for it,
let me float on my unsetenty and wonder what happend,
For the sake of myself i know i am loved by who i dont know.

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