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I quietly walked to her room,
I nelt by her bed and just looked at her,
Waching her sleep,staring at her beauty,
I nudged her just a little bit,
Then she woke,
“How long were you trying to get me up?”
“Not long”, i repiled
I put my hand on her bed,
She opened hers, she put hers in my hand,
We held on to each other forever it seemeed,
But she moved and she put her head on my arm,
And still holding on to my hand,
“Tired?” she asked,
“No” I said,
(I only had 2 hours of sleep),
While she was on and holding on to me,
I put my head on the side of her bed and slepped a little more,
She did ,and i did, hand in hand,
Sleeping togather, forever more

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