Short Story / Trilogy - 3 stories - 6 words each

Great progression. Really there are only a couple of words that you might look at revising to better this guy’s impact. The first is “woes” – I feel there’s a better word that could go here . . . “woes” seems too general – I can’t tell you what to replace it with – there are a lot of directions it could go. Then there’s the title of the third vingette, which I feel should reference its being the ‘last’ rather than the ‘third.’ It might add meaning considering the content of the third thing. Overall, I love the feeling I get from this piece. It’s like listening to a really good song with no words – its melody is its meaning.