Short Story / Story - 3 parts - 6 words each
“Part One”
Shannon dreamed, created, inspired, then died.
“The Sequel”
Her death proved woes draw fame.
“part The Third”
‘I died before I loved you.’
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are these for the 6 word contest? If so. I must give low score. Only becaue i am hoping to have some emotion brought out, whether curiousity, humor, etc. this wasnt bad, but wasnt moving either.
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I enjoyed reading it. For it to have been such a short it extreme depth. Just One thing I struggled with was part three. You had developed two characters already were you bring in a thrid. I personally feel that part 3 would have been better if you ended it with her since it was a sequel to Shannon’s creative will. Even after death she inspired you. Great story.
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