Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir

It’s difficult to find substance in so few words, but I believe you have found it. It succinctly addresses the goal of all, really, all artists: to be appreciated. If your longer works are this neat and articulate, I intend to keep reading.

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August 15, 2008

by Indya

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Thank you so much!

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This speaks to me, and I think is a statement that many people will be able to apply to themselves, while at the same time is definitely a “memoir.”  It works well for the project, but may not be quite witty enough to grab people’s attention.  I’m also curious as to why you’ve left off the period at the end.  It looks sloppy to leave off such a small detail.  Good job overall.  

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August 15, 2008

by Indya

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Thank you.

August 17, 2008

by metaphoricalsimile

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You’re welcome.

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It’s okay. I wasn’t bowled over and it’s not untrue.

LOVED IT!
Short, quick, simple and straight to the point.

As your second to last word says…its “true.”

Good job….
IT’S GOOD!

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July 27, 2008

by Indya

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Thank you so much for your kind words!

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This is more like a quote that we all try to introduce into our daily lives. It lacks a unique appeal because it is so universal

no doubt
this I feel is the feeling most artists have
bravo

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July 25, 2008

by Indya

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Thanks so much for your review.

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I like it, but I find it too impersonal for a memoir.

I think you don’t need to say “true excellence”. Excellence is something subjective, it’s hard do define it as true. Maybe “perfection” was closer to what you had in mind.

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July 25, 2008

by Indya

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I appreciate your thoughts on this.  Thank you.

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Congratulations.I think we have a winner.

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July 24, 2008

by Indya

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Thank you so much for your review!  Some people have read this and thought I was saying that I have achieved true excellence already when I actually meant that it could never been a possibility until I could get over my fears.  Your positive comment is definitely appreciated!

July 24, 2008

by oneshot92

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I knew exactly what you meant. You will never succeed until you take that leap of faith.

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I like this.
Its very true.
Nobody can really achieve until they overcome the fear of failure.

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July 24, 2008

by Indya

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Thank you for your review.  I think many of us have had this struggle so I’d hoped people would relate to this.

July 24, 2008

by Indya

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Thank you for your review.  I think many of us have had this struggle so I’d hoped people would relate to this.

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Gets the message across… but is it really possible to achieve true excellence? Maybe “reaching for excellence”? Just an idea :)

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July 25, 2008

by Indya

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Thank you for your thoughts.

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