Short Story / Almost

Never quite got there, still trying.

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September 18, 2008

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August 19, 2008

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July 29, 2008

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An earnest effort but the secret to great writing is to leave some mystery, something ambiguous for the reader’s imagination to swim in. I realize that’s a tall order for this six-word contest. Good luck. Keep writing!

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July 24, 2008

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July 23, 2008

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me too, a neverending path…....very nice…....and keep at it….......

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July 23, 2008

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So true. It can be a struggle. I think you captured the feeling you were going for.

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July 23, 2008

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True of many regrets in life. Is it worth trying anew, or perhaps better to admit defeat and move on?

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July 22, 2008

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Where were you going?  A bit too vague.

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July 22, 2008

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Only the second one of these today that I actually enjoyed. And 1 of only 3 that was actually a memoir. It’s definitely a glimpse into your creative life. It’s something true and while not necessarily sublime, this little engine that “never quite got there” is definitely on its way.

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July 22, 2008

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I think this one should definately make it in.

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Sailinghomeward

Age: 54
Loc: United Kingdom
Gen: M
Last Login: February 27
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