Short Story / Almost
Never quite got there, still trying.
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An earnest effort but the secret to great writing is to leave some mystery, something ambiguous for the reader’s imagination to swim in. I realize that’s a tall order for this six-word contest. Good luck. Keep writing!
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me too, a neverending path…....very nice…....and keep at it….......
So true. It can be a struggle. I think you captured the feeling you were going for.
True of many regrets in life. Is it worth trying anew, or perhaps better to admit defeat and move on?
Where were you going? A bit too vague.
Only the second one of these today that I actually enjoyed. And 1 of only 3 that was actually a memoir. It’s definitely a glimpse into your creative life. It’s something true and while not necessarily sublime, this little engine that “never quite got there” is definitely on its way.
I think this one should definately make it in.
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