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Nice sentiment. But it doesn’t say much about you. Are you the oak, or the saw?

Now I’ll be the saw…

I believe this has been said before, so perhaps it would be better to acknowledge it by saying “like the mighty oak, fears the saw”, which would be a clear statement about your writing.

I like it. I’s very “elephant and the mouse.” No matter how big or strong you ar, you’re still human (or oak in this case).

I like this one.  It could even say “The oak especially fears the saw.”  Anyway, it has a good sound to it.  Nice work.  Good luck.

B.

Very true, different perspective on life, like the brevity of it.

This is one of those statements I feel I’ve heard before…?

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July 23, 2008

by Mjbel777

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News to me. confucius say he who fart in church sit in own pew.

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Very Zen-like and mystical, but it feels like I have heard it before.

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I’m getting that froma few people. Im trying to find it anywhere. I hope its not something regurgitated from my subconcious.

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I like it, the idea that your fate is irrepressible seems strong through this, it’s like one of those really old proverbs (Japanese/ Chinese?)

There is much truth in your post, but I don’t see anything pertaining to the creative life in this six word piece. Unless you are trying to state that you fear your creative side will be cut off.

Allegory perhaps?

Capitalising ‘Saw’ would add more emphasis to it.