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A bit lean on ideas huh? Or is that KFC ‘finger lickin good’ wings?

The mind boggles.

This is great!  It definitely tells the reader what the writing process is like.  Kudos!  

This is rather an offbeat simile.  On one hand, you are telling me that you really work at getting every idea out of your mind and into your creative endeavors.  On the other hand, I hope you’re not saying that you eat your brain.  

It seems like there must be more equal comparisons to juxtapose.

Good luck with the contest.

Dave

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July 23, 2008

by aime

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It’s the idea of picking at my brain and my thoughts like you would with chicken bones, trying to get every little last piece, picking them clean of all inspiration/meat also I think you are taking it too literally no I do not eat my brain but you do consume ideas

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-You got a chuckle out of me. Good job.

-Keep writing and thanks for sharing.

Comedic and so true. I love the imagery. It’s very fun.

I don’t think this works well because it’s incomprehensible.