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Growing older but never grown up.

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derekosborne avatar General Stranger

July 26, 2008

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Well, I like it.  My brain hard wired at 16.  I gave it high marks to see if they like it

jeells avatar General Stranger

July 23, 2008

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A true story many can relate to, but kind of cliche. Maybe giving an example of this would be a better use of the six words. I like the quote; I just don’t know if it will have any luck in the contest.

Indya avatar General Stranger

July 23, 2008

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I like the idea that you can gain wisdom with age and still remain open to new thoughts and ideas; be silly and fresh.  This could also mean something completely different but I like that about it.  Nice job.

misskara avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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i like it – but i think maybe “grew up” would sound better.  but great!  i can relate.  ;)

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July 22, 2008

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i read ur 6 word piece and i thought it was an ok on, did really like it tho cuz i thought it was alittle immature. like what it says the meaning of it sounds like u don’t want t grow up. nice work tho better luck next time.

NightRainbow avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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This could be an interesting tale.  I think it captures the imagination enough to want to find out more.

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July 22, 2008

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Such a tricky thing to master, age brings wisdom, but it also brings the worries of the world. We need to balance the wonder and fun of youth, with the experiences of age. Wonderful sentiment!

jabf avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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Very joyful imagery through your good choice of words.  Made me smile.  Thanks!  Good luck!

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July 22, 2008

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Me neither. I still expect Santa to come. hahahah. Who wants to grow old and why should we have too. Ilove it. It speaks to me and will speak to others. Thank you Sandi

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Age: 29
Loc: Portland, OR
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Last Login: October 12
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