tnd might be correct, but my two cents would be to leave the comma :)
Quotes / 6 word memior...by accident...:)
Now be honest, and just lie.
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That’s very funny! I don’t totally agree, but it makes a lot of sense and it’s brilliant. The only thing I can say is that the word “now” doesn’t go with a memoir, so maybe I would find the way to improve that. All the rest is ok!
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To me this quote has some humor to it. I think this quote can fit many people in the world, a few in mine. It definitely makes the reader reread it and ponder! I like it!
I like the irony of the statement. I have something similar on a shirt. “Trust me, I’m a liar”
If you embroidered this on a shirt I think you could probably sell millions of them. Very clever.
Unable to determine a situation where a lie would be the best honesty, I’ll probably mull this one over until the right moment is found. This paradoxical moment has got to exist somewhere…
It doesn’t do much for a memoir right off the bat, but it does hold some potential, if I could figure it out.
I love this one and had to track you down to comment. But Im a movie buff and V for Vendetta is one of my favorites (esp when judging dialog, in fact is there more colorful dialog in any movie) but there is a line that says writers use lies to tell the truth. This six liner sums that up and etched respect in me.
This six word memoir is expressive and somewhat quizzical. Good
Amazingly true to the dark times in which we live I love contrasting words that transform each other to tell a whole story as you have done here. Bravo.
-Pair of 10’s. The BEST one that I’ve read.
(Just one little thing. Take out the comma before ‘and,’ please.)
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