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Now be honest, and just lie.

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starla77 avatar General Stranger

August 26, 2008

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That’s very funny! I don’t totally agree, but it makes a lot of sense and it’s brilliant. The only thing I can say is that the word “now” doesn’t go with a memoir, so maybe I would find the way to improve that. All the rest is ok!

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August 24, 2008

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To me this quote has some humor to it. I think this quote can fit many people in the world, a few in mine. It definitely makes the reader reread it and ponder! I like it!

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August 22, 2008

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I like the irony of the statement. I have something similar on a shirt. “Trust me, I’m a liar”

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August 22, 2008

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If you embroidered this on a shirt I think you could probably sell millions of them. Very clever.

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August 19, 2008

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actually, very appropriate

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August 19, 2008

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Unable to determine a situation where a lie would be the best honesty, I’ll probably mull this one over until the right moment is found. This paradoxical moment has got to exist somewhere…
It doesn’t do much for a memoir right off the bat, but it does hold some potential, if I could figure it out.

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August 08, 2008

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I love this one and had to track you down to comment. But Im a movie buff and V for Vendetta is one of my favorites (esp when judging dialog, in fact is there more colorful dialog in any movie) but there is a line that says writers use lies to tell the truth. This six liner sums that up and etched respect in me.

Aesop avatar General Stranger

July 21, 2008

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This six word memoir is expressive and somewhat quizzical. Good

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July 21, 2008

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Amazingly true to the dark times in which we live I love contrasting words that transform each other to tell a whole story as you have done here. Bravo.

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July 21, 2008

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-Pair of 10’s. The BEST one that I’ve read.

(Just one little thing. Take out the comma before ‘and,’ please.)

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