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This is the case with me too. Things go on, I write about it. Nice work!

i read ur piece and i thought it was uncear to me and i didnt understand it. maybe u should review what you wrote and do it again.

i know this type of writing will always be brief in the fact it is right to the point. i like this but I feel like their are so much more to say that 6 words dont or cant say them.

This is a well thought out and constructed story.  Challenging to decipher yet, upon one reading, it carries with it a reasonable amount of pull which makes one – perhaps – think that reading it again and trying to work out and understand the plain meaning or meanings and all the subtleties and nuances is worth the effort.   Overall well constructed and good writing.

I don’t know much about six word memoirs, but your choice of words were quite eloquent.

“Reservoirs” is such a great word choice.  It really says a lot.  ”Disquiet” is an interesting word choice too.  I looked it up to make sure what I thought it meant was accurate.  It was. “Nourished” is excellent as well.  Okay, so I really liked this.  It says a lot to me.  Plus, I can relate to it.  Good luck!

Big words, makes it sound a little ethereal, but it also loses me a little, but when Ibreak it down and go through each word; ‘nourish’ like to sustain/supply, ‘reservoirs’ the large bodies of water, man-made or or natural, ‘disquiet’ the obvious opposite of quiet; it begins to make more sense.
Although I still feel a little lost.
But I think I get the meaning here.
Imagination’s fueled by emotional nergy, right?

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August 30, 2008

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Well disquiet means “uneasiness.” Hope that helps ^^

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Hah. I hear you. That’s a well phrased, simple way of talking about all those thoughts and worries and dreams that come together in inexplicable ways and give us stories to tell. And that’s a hard concept to really capture in six words.

The phrase ‘reservoirs of disquiet’ has a nice ring to it. And it’s perfect for what you’re trying to say. Well written.

very clever, loved the usage of the word ‘reservoirs’. It is always amazing how someone can say so much by saying so little, great job, especially for your first attempt! I say, keep posting!  me…

I do like how it flows, it makes you think and most of all I think it’s more complex than you presumed. It made me go back and re-read it to see all of the directions it’s going in. I think your word choices, “reservoirs of disquiet” were well-handled and mature. I also like that this is in an actual sentence so you are making a statement, not just stringing words along.