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Killing yourself in your wedding dress.

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PIMckenzie avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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Not a memoir.
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eminemslove85 avatar General Friend

July 21, 2008

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i read ur piece and i thought that was very thoughful and very awesome. it was a very power piece and it was very awesome and great and wonderful!! great job.

Herowriter avatar General Stranger

July 21, 2008

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This was so funny.  I happen to be a manager at a Burger King.

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July 21, 2008

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This made me smile, torturing your readership in a way! If you’re writing for vegetarians, why not give them carrots? lol! But as a memoir of your creative life it somehow doesn’t give a big enough picture though I think you’re on the right track! good luck!

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July 21, 2008

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This sound very good. How does this explain your life? The actual meaning is not very clear if I think of its’ relevance to your situation.

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July 21, 2008

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Dare I say it – ‘Biting Humour’.  It feels like the kind of saying you might here on David Letterman’s top 10 list, or a list of one liners told by a comedian.  It is both satirical and funny.  For the limitation of just 6 words this can rightly be viewed as quite a good effort.

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Age: 19
Loc: NY, NY
Gen: F
Last Login: August 29
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